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Tuesday 10 July 2012
You're Mine, Shun! (An Imagination with Shun Kazami)
Title : You’re Mine, Shun!
Sub
Title : An Imagination with Shun
Kazami
Writer : Indah Sunny
Pertiwi Larasati – Indonesia
Email : SECRET
Part : 1
Language :
Indonesian Version
Original Ver.: Indonesian Version (You’re Mine, Shun!)
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Hai, hai, guys! Ini cerita kedua ~C’Indah~! Sama
seperti cerita pertama ~C’Indah~, di dalam cerita ini, kamu harus
ngebayangin cerita ini seperti kehidupan kamu. Tapi bedanya, kali ini bukan
tentang Super Junior lagi. Ehm...By the way, kamu tau, nggak film kartum Jepang
(ANIME) yang berjudul Bakugan? Bakugan memang terdiri dari beberapa season,
seperti Bakugan: Battle Brawlers, Bakugan: Gundalian Invaders, dan masih banyak
lagi. Selain itu, Bakugan juga terdiri dari beberapa karakter dan diketuai oleh
6 karakter utama (MAIN CHARACTERS) yang di antaranya adalah Dan, Marucho, dan 4
lagi. Tetapi yang menjadi topik ceritaku kali ini adalah seorang karakter yang
bernama SHUN KAZAMI. Udah tau blom dengan Shun? Hehehe... Ya udah, biar ~C’Indah~
kasih basa-basi dulu, ya! Shun adalah satu dari 6 karakter utama Bakugan.
Shun dikenal dengan sifat angkuh dan sungkar berbicara. Meski begitu, dia
memiliki banyak sekali fans yang KATANYA bernama SHUNEIZER. Shun dikenal HOT
dan keren. Dia akan bersifat angkuh bila bertemu seseorang yang belum dia kenal
(biasanya) tetapi dia akan bersifat santai dan murah senyum bila orang itu
dikenal dan orang itu juga baik dengannya. Di dalam cerita ini, kamu ceritanya
AKAN JADI PACARNYA SHUN KAZAMI! Jadi, buat yang udah punya pacar, hati-hati
dengan pacar laki-lakinya, ya :p! Trus, seperti ceritaku, We & Super Junior,
karakter-karakter dalam cerita ini bisa Bahasa Indonesia. Terakhir, ceritanya
umur kamu itu 12 tahun (yang lebih atau yang kurang dari 12 tahun sorry ya kalo
nggak suka :) !) Udah cukup, ya basa-basinya. So, cekidot!
Kamu adalah seorang anak gadis yang berumur 12 tahun yang
kaya raya. Kamu memiliki rumah besar atau biasa disebut dengan ISTANA YANG
SANGAT MEWAH. Kamu tidak tinggal sendirian, kamu tinggal bersama
pelayan-pelayanmu, sopirmu, satpam-satpammu, koki-kokimu, 3 orang teman
cewekmu, dan juga adik laki-lakimu. Sayangnya, kamu dan adikmu itu yatim-piatu.
Orang tua kamu udah meninggal sejak 3 tahun yang lalu karena ketabrak kereta
api.
Selain itu, kamu dan ketiga teman-temanmu punya hobi
nge-dance dan nyanyi. Kamu dan adikmu adalah mantan ninja, jadi kamu dan adikmu
bisa gerak cepat bila kalian mau cepet-cepet.
Suatu hari, kamu, adikmu, dan ketiga temanmu lagi main di
dekat sebuah batu yang besarnya lebih besar dari tinggi kamu yang tidak terlalu
jauh rumah kamu. Waktu kamu lagi main, tiba-tiba kamu denger suara ledakan di
sisi lain batu itu. Kamu meloncat tinggi dan melihat keadaan. Ternyata, kamu
melihat 6 orang yang terdiri dari 3 cowok dan 2 cewek yang di depan mereka
berdiri seseorang tinggi besar yang misterius.
Tiba-tiba kamu melihat dia melempar 3 buah shuriken (senjata
ninja Jepang jaman dahulu). Cepat-cepat kamu melompat dan menghadang shuriken
itu untuk tidak melukai keenam orang tersebut. Lalu, kamu menendang perut
laki-laki itu, menonjok kepalanya, dan menginjak kakinya dan akhirnya laki-laki
itu mati. Kamu berbalik arah untuk melihat keadaan 6 orang tadi.
U: Kalian nggak apa-apa, kan?
Dan: Iya.
Marucho: Nama kamu siapa?
U: Sunny [Ceritanya nama kamu Sunny]. Kalian siapa dan mau
apa ke sini?
Dan: Aku Dan. Ini teman-temanku.
Marucho: Aku Marucho
Julie: Aku Julie, pacarnya Dan (Kegeeran)
Runo: Aku Runo. Jangan percaya kata-kata Julie! Akulah
pacarnya Dan (iri sama Julie)
Alice: Apa kalian bisa berhenti bertengkar? Oh maaf, Sunny!
Namaku Alice dan dia adalah sahabatku, Shun
Shun hanya melihatmu dengan tatapan yang angkuh. Kamu sedikit
sedih tetapi karena kamu baru kenal dia, kamu jadi biasa saja.
Dan: Oh ya, Sunny, kamu tinggal di mana?
U: Di balik batu ini, ada sebuah rumah. Di sana aku tinggal.
Kalian mau ke rumahku?
Marucho: Ya. Jika kau nggak keberatan.
U: Nggak, kok. Aku nggak keberatan.
Tiba-tiba, kamu mendengar suara perut Runo yang keroncongan.
Runo: Di rumah kamu ada makanan, kan?
U: Ada. Ya udah, ayo! Nanti keburu malem.
Kalian pergi ke rumahmu. Di rumahmu, 3 temenmu dan adikmu
sudah menunggu.
U: Oh ya, kenalin ini temen-temenku.
Regina: Aku Regina, sahabat paling deket Sunny.
Sooyeon: Aku Sooyeon, sahabat Sunny dari Korea.
Yuki: Aku Yuki, sahabat Sunny yang paling pinter (kegeeran).
Allan: Aku Allan, adiknya Sunny-unnie.
Esok harinya...
[Akan dilanjutkan ke part 2]
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From writer:
Hi! This is my 2nd series story. I hope you like
it! I am not good writing with English language so I write this with my
country’s language. So, thanks for reading!
Editor Username: Writer Username:
~VanilaBlast~
~C’Indah~
Be-u-to-full (Hate being Heart)
Title
: Be-u-to-full
Sub Title
: Hate being Heart
Writer :
Sun Kyu Hyun & Akai Bara – South Korea (Sunny) &
Japan (Bara)
Email : sunkyuhyun@gmail.com (Sunny) &
SECRET (Bara)
Part : 1
Language : English Version
Original Ver.: English
Version (Bee-u-to-full)
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~Be-u-to-full~
Ciao! I am Yamamoto Hiroto. For
easy, just call me Hiroto of Hiro, okay? I am very hate girls because they are
always spoiled to boys. Honnestly, I am hate too my women teachers, but I am
very scare with they.
Today, as usual, I am woke
up at 6.00 am. After breakfast, I am going to my school by bicycle. Because my
parents always busy, I am always go to school only myself.
Finally, I arrived at
school. I am parking my bike and to my classroom. In my class, many of the
crowd of students gathered around a student. I wonder what are they see? But I
don’t care it. I just want to sit in my chair.
Few minutes later, the bell
rang. Every students are entering their class. I feel there is a different in
my class. Let me think it... Watta’ hell? There is a NEW GIRL IN MY CLASS? Oh,
God, now I am like on a hell!
Suddenly, Mrs. Azusa is
entering my class.
“Ohayōgozaimasu,
watashi no deshi! Anata wa watashitachi no atarashī tomodachi ni atta koto ga
arimasu ka?” Asked Mrs.
Azusa.
Meaning: Good morning, my students! Are you
already have meet and greet our new friend?
“Ohayōgozaimasu, Azusa-sensei!” answered students except
me.
Meaning: Good morning, Mrs.
Azusa!
After that, we (the
students) have different answers. Some students said they already had met the
new student. The rest and me answer we are not meet and greet that new student
yet.
“Okay, because your answers
are different, so let her introduce herself in front of classroom! Shite kudasai,
Bikutoria!”
Said Mrs. Azusa.
Meaning: Please, Victoria
“Dōmo arigatōgozaimashita, Azusa-sensei! Kon'nichiwa, watashi no atarashī tomodachi! Mina-san hajimemashite!” Answered her.
Meaning: Thank you very
much, Mrs. Azusa! Hello, my new friends! Nice to meet you all!
“Watashinonamaeha Takahashi Bikutoriadesu. Watashi wa Tōkyō
shusshin de, chichi no shigotonode, watashinokazoku wa Saitama ni idō shimashita.
Mōshiwakearimasenga, watashi wa eigo o hanasu koto wa dekimasen yo Minasan
hajimemashite!” Said the new student named
Victoria.
Meaning: My name is
Takahashi Victoria. I was born in Tokyo, because my father's job, my family has
been moved to Saitama. Sorry, because I can’t speak English. Nice to meet you
all!
“Daijōbu, Bikutoria. Sono
shōnen no yoko ni suwaru!” Said Mrs. Azusa and she pointed
at me!
Meaning:
Okay, Victoria. Sit beside that boy!
Oh, God, i
think i am really on a hell! Victoria is walking to chair beside me. And she sit
right to my left!
[will
continue to part 2]
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send a critique or suggestion for this story? Write in the new comment or send
an email to shuneizerantichibi@gmail.com.
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From
writer:
Hi, all!
Thanks very much if you read our story! We are very happy if you send we an
email about critique, suggestion, or all you want to send to we. Send we and
email to sunkyuhyun@gmail.com. Thanks again!
Editor
Username: Writer
Username:
~VanilaBlast~ ~SparKyu~ & ~RoxieBara~
NOT Just My IDOL!!! (아니 그냥 내 우상!!!) As seen in StoryCreator
Tittle : NOT Just My IDOL!!!
Sub Tittle : 아니 그냥 내 우상!!! (Ani Geunyang Nae Usang !!!)
Writer : Sunjinhan Yeon Mu - South Korea
Email : mailtohina.DA@gmail.com
Part : 1
Language : English Version
Original Ver.: English Version (NOT Just My IDOL!!!)
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Are you have a favorite idol? Or much favorite idols? Me? Sure! I have favorite idols. Oh yes, by the way, nice to meet you! My name's Kim Sunny Yeon Mi and i am 15 years old. I am a high school student now. My school is Holy Magic Moonlight High School in 2 A class. My friends usually call me 'Professor' maybe because i am the smartest student in my school. Honestly, today is my first day in my new class. So, what happened next is surprises.
I wake up at 6:30 am. After that, I am tidying up my bed, i take a bath, wearing my uniform, and eat my breakfast. And finally, i go to my school. When i enter my new class, many students who are gathering students in table 4,6,15,19,20,24,28,30. I wonder what are they see? Never mind, i just wanna sit in my chair. For your information, I have absence number 29. So, i am sit near 28 and 30.
Oh, my god! There's a very handsome boys between me and i know they! They are Lee Sooheon and Choi Ka Min, 2 members from my favorite boy band, Star Boy Star!!! Wow! I don't believe this will be really and not a fake! But... I am too shy to tell it... Why Sooheon looking at me now?
"Hi! What's your name?" ask Sooheon.
"I?"
"Yes, you."
"I...My name Sunny."
"Are you already have a boyfriend?"
WHAT?!
"N...no."
"Hahaha....Don't be shy, i just asking you. If you want to be my girl friend just tell me, okay?"
WHAT? ARE YOU SERIOUS? OF COURSE!!!!!!!!!
"O...okay."
"Bye!"
So, he is going to out and of course with his fans too.
"Hi! What's your name?" ask Sooheon.
"I?"
"Yes, you."
"I...My name Sunny."
"Are you already have a boyfriend?"
WHAT?!
"N...no."
"Hahaha....Don't be shy, i just asking you. If you want to be my girl friend just tell me, okay?"
WHAT? ARE YOU SERIOUS? OF COURSE!!!!!!!!!
"O...okay."
"Bye!"
So, he is going to out and of course with his fans too.
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~SBerryMuch~ ~Sunnieizer~
We & Super Junior (An Imagination with Super Junior)
Tittle : We & Super Junior
Sub Tittle : An Imagination with Super Junior
Writer : Indah Sunny Pertiwi Larasati
Email : SECRET
Part : 1
Language : Indonesian Version
Original Ver.: Indonesian Version (We & Super Junior)
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Hai, guys! Pasti udah tau, donk dengan boy band legendaris, internasional, and personil-personilnya yang ganteng-ganteng, SUPER JUNIOR? Yup! Hampir semua orang di benua asia dan benua eropa sudah mengenal grup band yang satu ini. By the way, kamu itu seorang ELF, nggak? Oke, kalo ngerasa kamu seorang ELF, wajib baca cerita yang udah i buat. Oke, keep your eyes healthy and don't forget give my story +1 too, ya, guys! Oh ya, dalam cerita ini, kamu harus ngebayangin sambil baca cerita ini. Trus, maksutnya BIAS itu, personil favorite kamu di SuJu. Satu lagi, cerita ini khusus buat cewek yang blom punya pacar (kalo yg udah baca boleh" aja baca tapi hati" dimarahin pacar, ya! :p ) . Trus, ceritanya kamu manggil biasmu itu KAKAK padahal ceritanya umur kamu sama biasmu sama.Yang terakhir, dalam cerita ini, akan keluar banyak artis Korea lain selain SuJu,ceritanya mereka dan SuJu bisa dan ngerti Bahasa Indonesia. Udah jelas instruksinya, kan? So, cekidot! ~C'Indah~
Pada suatu hari, kamu ketemu seorang cowok ganteenggg banget apalagi kamu itu ngenal dan nge-fans banget sama dia. Kamu tau nggak dia siapa? Dia itu bias kamu di SuJu! Kamu sampe nggak percaya banget bisa ketemu biasmu.
"Ka...kakak...kakak itu personil SuJu, kan?" tanya kamu malu-malu.
"Ye! (Ya!) Memangnya kenapa?" tanya biasmu sedikit angkuh.
"Nggak cuma nanya," jawab kamu.
"Oh, nama kamu siapa?" tanya biasmu lagi.
"Namaku [Sebutin nama kamu]," jawab kamu lagi.
"Oh, mmm.... kamu mau jalan-jalan sama aku nggak?"
"HAH? Oh, maksud aku iya. Gwaenchanh-ayo, oppa (baiklah, kak)!"
Lalu, kamu dan biasmu jalan-jalan di taman. Pertama, kamu ngeliat air mancur taman. Kedua, kamu makan-makan di cafe. Terakhir, kamu duduk-duduk di taman.
"Oh ya, oppa, oppa udah punya pacar blom?" tanya kamu.
Biasmu sedikit malu. Tapi dia jawab jujur.
"Udah," jawab biasmu.
Kamu terkejut dan sedih karna sebenernya kamu itu suka sama biasmu.
"Oh...Aku cuma nanya doang."
"Tapi jangan kaget, ya! Sebenernya, walaupun kita baru ketemu, aku pengen milih kamu, tapi aku terlanjur milih dia."
Perasaan kamu jadi sedikit seneng.
"Oh,begitu."
Saat kamu sama biasmu ngobrol-ngobrol, ada seseorang nyamperin biasmu.
Ternyata...
[Akan dilanjutkan di Part 2]
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~VanilaBlast~ ~C'Indah~
Monday 9 July 2012
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